Replies to 'Defining Your Authentic Self'

When I read the lasted feed-back, it made me think, 

that everything is short and easily known, and yet on the mountain brink. 

To be otherwise, is to go against the flow, 

And it is health and lifestyle below. 

 looking over a small fence, is fear but here, 

just like the world has many an opportunity to have been seen looking from a fence,  

is a very faint line on a page of life,  

developing the inspiration to climb and go down  

comes from the experience of being a young one. 

I wrote this, just then,  to express my own looking down to the Blue-mountains (a look-out) when I was on a school-excursion, on a radiant day. 

( if this is sweet, I couldn't help it, I guess I look back too often to the bitter & sweet) 

Taemanai